Shot Dead; Thanksgiving Day
Guy gets on my bus:
"I saw an old man shot
to death on Thanksgiving day"
he says.
I just looked at him.
Then he says,
"I hate Detroit"
Still looking at him;
then he says,
"I'm from Miami."
"Florida".
Like I couldn't
tell.
Couldn't tell he was from Florida.
And like, I didn't know
Miami
is in Florida.
*****************
(Based on the works and style of Raymond Carver)
"I saw an old man shot
to death on Thanksgiving day"
he says.
I just looked at him.
Then he says,
"I hate Detroit"
Still looking at him;
then he says,
"I'm from Miami."
"Florida".
Like I couldn't
tell.
Couldn't tell he was from Florida.
And like, I didn't know
Miami
is in Florida.
*****************
(Based on the works and style of Raymond Carver)

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